This is my first blog so may I ask did you like it?
first of all, congratulations on writing your first blog. i was able to understand what you were trying to say. however, i wasn't able to understand the purpose of your blog: it is a mere restatement of historical facts. they were just a series of information with nothing interesting or which wasn't already known. you didn't even bothered to run your text through something like grammarly.
@TheBuckThunder said in #3:
> first of all, congratulations on writing your first blog. i was able to understand what you were trying to say. however, i wasn't able to understand the purpose of your blog: it is a mere restatement of historical facts. they were just a series of information with nothing interesting or which wasn't already known. you didn't even bothered to run your text through something like grammarly.
well, actually you're right, I'll go edit what I wrote
> first of all, congratulations on writing your first blog. i was able to understand what you were trying to say. however, i wasn't able to understand the purpose of your blog: it is a mere restatement of historical facts. they were just a series of information with nothing interesting or which wasn't already known. you didn't even bothered to run your text through something like grammarly.
well, actually you're right, I'll go edit what I wrote